February 16th, 2014, 10:34 pm

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Reply Royle McCulloch, February 16th, 2014, 10:34 pm

And all the time Ray is there, unmoved.

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Reply godmoderncommander, February 16th, 2014, 10:43 pm

OH NO. THE FORTH WALL IS BROKEN!! RUN BEFORE IT'S TO- *gets suck into a blackhole*

Reply Shard, February 16th, 2014, 10:43 pm

And now Ray's gonna think he's crazy because he's talking to the air.

He's probably like, "Who're these authors of Smackjeeves? The hell is wrong with this guy?"

Great job at first impressions!

Reply Royle McCulloch, February 16th, 2014, 10:47 pm

@Shard: Ever considered if you talk to the air like that, you're addressing a reader of your story?

Reply Snurple-the-Hedgehog, February 16th, 2014, 10:48 pm


@Royle McCulloch : Not always.

Reply Frost The Wolf, February 16th, 2014, 11:03 pm

And with that, we break existence

Reply Light-Called-Hope, February 16th, 2014, 11:05 pm

@Snurple-the-Hedgehog: There seem to be more everyday.

Reply Ultimate the Hedgehog, February 17th, 2014, 9:13 pm

Oh Jeric... be careful what you wish for.

Reply kinny-man, February 21st, 2014, 3:27 pm

As soon as I read the last two panels, I was like "pfffchahahahahaha!".
Nice atmosphere breaking you . . Fourth-wall. . . .Puncher. .. .Talker.

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