Direction (~UTH)

February 25th, 2014, 7:03 pm

Average Rating: 4.00
I made this in only two days. A new record for me. Normally would take me a whole week.
Author's Comments:

Reply Ultimate the Hedgehog, February 25th, 2014, 7:11 pm


Don't forget to comment!

Man, I now realize how rusty I am when it comes to making decent effects.

I need practice.

Anyway I also enjoyed making this page. It was... fun.
Ult and Ed encounter their old pal Jeric (who is psychotic as ever) and seem to be ignoring Ray all together (due to me not knowing that much about Ray's personality). The group now sets off to find Silas' base of operations.
Meanwhile, Khennan is spying on some Bandits.

-Ultimate The Hedgehog
-Edward Grey/Steel
-Jeric McCulloch
-Ray... uh... whatever his full name is.
-Ember (female bandit)
-Random bandit (appeared in my last page. just got killed.)
-Khennan the Hedgehog

Want sprites? Ask for 'em.

Hope you liked it. if you missed my last page, here .

With that, I take my leave.


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User's Comments:

Reply Royle McCulloch, February 25th, 2014, 7:14 pm


Reply Master_72, February 25th, 2014, 7:20 pm

I can barely tell what's going on, your backgrounds are out of place and make your characters invisible. Almost everything that's going on here is senseless violence and little to no story. If you intended to make that history lesson in the description a reference, it's not really effective since I'm not seeing how all this connects. your blur effects are bad, and sometimes it's hard to tell who's talking because of the poorly-constructed speech bubbles. This thing has more potholes than Sharknado, and although the effects are pretty from time-to-time your concept is a 12-page story turned comic. I literally feel like I'm reading COD zombies except without the zombies and with 50% more Sonic edits.

All that taken into mind, i do sometimes get a bit interested as i read, but the way you guys have structured a "turn" system here makes it so as to any story established by one author is then completely shat upon by the next, and we're force-fed some more "seriousness" and Senseless violence.

Reply kinny-man, February 25th, 2014, 7:22 pm

Aaah, the (Short) life of a random mook.
And hey, why isn't Ed hitting on Ray? Ray's clearly a gi- *Muderinated*

Reply Royle McCulloch, February 25th, 2014, 7:24 pm

Jeric: it's what i'm all about.

Reply Royle McCulloch, February 25th, 2014, 7:34 pm

@Millia Maxwell:
Jeric: because you're my bitch now.

Reply godmoderncommander, February 25th, 2014, 7:45 pm

@Master_72: ...How is the backgrounds out of place when it is at a DESTROYED CITY? Not to mention that not every city is the same. One part of it could be a industrialized area while the other looks like an abandoned district.

And while I do admit the plot is scattered at the moment, the reasons being is because:

1. It's a muti-author comic where everyone updates whenever they want. It not exactly a turn base comic like some other comics. Think of it like a showcase but with comics instead.

2. This is just the beginning chapter and everyone is just making their intros and trying to enter the city and meet with each other. And everyone has to be in the city somehow.

And finally, we hadn't started on the plot yet. We're trying to get everyone's (or mostly everyone's if the other do not update soon enough)intro and get everyone to meet up. THEN we'll start the plot, and I will make sure everyone follows it.

I not saying this comic is going to be perfect. No muti-author comic like this will be. But I damn well making sure it will not be a COMPLETE MESS UP.

And as for that history lesson that you were talking about? Let's just say I will be mentioning it OFTEN.

Reply Master_72, February 25th, 2014, 8:39 pm

Fair enough, I'll keep watching this for now.

Reply Royle McCulloch, February 25th, 2014, 9:17 pm

@Master_72: I'm glad you understand.

Reply BuddyT, February 25th, 2014, 9:37 pm

Man, I am lovin this. c:

Reply TouhouShake, February 26th, 2014, 3:22 pm

Bloody mobsters.


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